Created by:
Joe Eglow
Voice:
Alloy
Topic:
🎬 THE LAST ORDER Short Film Script Language: German (with English subtitles) Length: 5–7 minutes Style: Realistic, gritty, war drama Location: A muddy German trench on the Western Front, 1917 ⸻ SCENE 1 – “TRENCH SILENCE” INT. GERMAN TRENCH – DAWN Muffled artillery echoes in the distance. The trench is soaked in mud. Rain drizzles. A young soldier, HEINRICH BRAUS (17), trembles in the corner. He is pale, dirty, and silently crying. Around him, wounded soldiers groan — some dead, others bandaged and barely moving. 🗨️ (German) Wounded Soldier (whispers): “Wir sind tot, bevor wir rausgehen.” (“We’re dead before we even go out.”) 🗨️ Heinrich (to himself, trembling): “Ich will nicht sterben…” (“I don’t want to die…”) Another soldier clutches a rosary. In the shadows, rats scurry. ⸻ SCENE 2 – “THE WHISTLE” INT. TRENCH – CONTINUOUS The harsh, sharp sound of a whistle cuts through the air. OFFICER FRITZ KRUGER (40s) strides in, blowing a silver whistle. He raises his hand and shouts. 🗨️ Kruger: “Alle Mann bereitmachen! Über die Mauer, los!” (“All men prepare! Over the top, move!”) Some soldiers climb the trench ladder, rifles in hand. Others break down, sobbing. 🗨️ Crying Soldier: “Bitte nicht! Ich flehe Sie an!” (“Please no! I’m begging you!”) Kruger glares at them with disgust. ⸻ SCENE 3 – “HEINRICH’S FEAR” Kruger walks past the line and stops at Heinrich, noticing his youth and fear. 🗨️ Kruger (stern): “Du! Was wartest du noch?” (“You! What are you waiting for?”) Heinrich says nothing. Tears run down his cheeks. His rifle lies beside him, untouched. 🗨️ Heinrich (softly): “Ich… ich kann nicht…” (“I… I can’t…”) ⸻ SCENE 4 – “THE ORDER” Kruger’s face grows red. He grabs a muddy rifle and shoves it into Heinrich’s hands. With the other hand, he points up the trench. 🗨️ Kruger (shouting): “Entweder kämpfst du oder du stirbst
Art Style:
Realistic
Writing Style:
Poetic
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